Bryce, in order to achieve higher than an E or F, you need to avoid describing what you can see, and instead say what "effect" it has or "why" it is there. For example: Instead of saying "the font they've chosen is eye catching." you could say "the font they've chosen for the word WANTED looks like an old fashioned western poster. This suggests the film may be set in the past, and possibly might be a western film. The fact that the background looks like old torn paper, also suggests that the film is set in the olden days."
Bryce, in order to achieve higher than an E or F, you need to avoid describing what you can see, and instead say what "effect" it has or "why" it is there. For example: Instead of saying "the font they've chosen is eye catching." you could say "the font they've chosen for the word WANTED looks like an old fashioned western poster. This suggests the film may be set in the past, and possibly might be a western film. The fact that the background looks like old torn paper, also suggests that the film is set in the olden days."
ReplyDeleteTry doing this in your next analysis
ANALYSIS = F